I really enjoy this poster. I think it had a lot of movement and the colors work really well together. There might be too much movement with all of the arrows. You might want to subtract some of the arrows to give the poster more open space. --Laura Cook
I agree with Laura on maybe subtracting a few of the arrows, but other than that I really like the direction that you are going with this one. First of all, I don't know that I have seen anyone else do anything quite this. It is really interesting to try to follow the curves of the letters in this composition. Beautiful. -Lauren Schimming
I LOVE your first one! I think that it is really unique and gets the point across clearly. The color palette works well with this design and the space is used very well. You are pretty observant and did a great job comparing the curves of each letter to one another. I think that you should use this one as we move forward. The only thing that I would possibly work with is the amount of arrows that you have throughout your design. See if taking away a few makes the composition better or even just change their color!
This design could almost be a logo! As people have noted before, subtracting some of the arrows could make this much more effective. Also, I wish there were more information about the characteristics.
I really enjoy this poster. I think it had a lot of movement and the colors work really well together. There might be too much movement with all of the arrows. You might want to subtract some of the arrows to give the poster more open space.
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I agree with Laura on maybe subtracting a few of the arrows, but other than that I really like the direction that you are going with this one. First of all, I don't know that I have seen anyone else do anything quite this. It is really interesting to try to follow the curves of the letters in this composition. Beautiful.
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I LOVE your first one! I think that it is really unique and gets the point across clearly. The color palette works well with this design and the space is used very well. You are pretty observant and did a great job comparing the curves of each letter to one another. I think that you should use this one as we move forward. The only thing that I would possibly work with is the amount of arrows that you have throughout your design. See if taking away a few makes the composition better or even just change their color!
ReplyDeleteThis design could almost be a logo! As people have noted before, subtracting some of the arrows could make this much more effective. Also, I wish there were more information about the characteristics.
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